Baked.

 

Baked.

The sun crackled, singeing her skin. She drank in the heat, letting it hit the depths of her lungs as it enveloped her, invading her body with its stifling smother. She opened one eye and saw her feathery lashes in the reflection of her sunglasses. They were curved, covered in a thick black mascara stain. She was batting them in vanity when she first noticed the lines. Little wrinkled trenches spanning away from those plumed hairs, gorging through the skin and reaching towards her eyebrows in a takeover of old age. Her designer lenses magnified them to horrific heights. Her years of sunshine allegiance, her practised pose of worship, her secret concoction of lemon juice and extra virgin olive oil, and all she was left with was something that resembled a desiccated baked potato.

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  1. […] Thank to Laura and her Literary Lion. Here is my take on this week’s prompt: Sun […]

  2. Andy says: Reply

    Love the idea of jumping from a vanity pose, to one of horror, reflected in her glasses. And the “desiccated baked potato” ending, nice. She has aged years, without even leaving her sun-lounger.

    1. The Marbella sun lounger… where the years can fly by in just a few hours.

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  5. Donna-Louise Bishop says: Reply

    *Raises hand* When’s this one due in Miss?

    1. Technically Wednesday, but then again technically Thursday, as I posted late. So I can’t really reprimand any latecomers… haha.

        1. No worries at all, I know how difficult it can be fitting it all in ?

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